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Wednesday, May 22, 2013

“The sky will rain The water will go to road” : Academic writing issues of foundation level students


Improving writing proficiency of EFL learners has become one of the major concerns among EFL teachers, instructors, course designers, and policy makers in contexts where English is studied as a foreign language. Learning a foreign language such as English is crucial to Gulf countries’ economic development and competitiveness because it enhances cognitive and social growth, competitiveness in the global marketplace and understanding of diverse people and cultures. As we approach a new century where global communication will be essential for survival, no nation can afford the luxury of ignoring linguistic factors that could affect their international profile and growth.

 As a teacher of English, your preoccupation with helping students to develop their skills in the target language should be your main concern in your teaching profession. When I undertook an English teaching position in a higher educational institution in the Gulf region country during the second semester of 2012, I was assigned a substitution class for a week in the pre-elementary program by the department of English. During that week, I was asked to do a revision of several modules from the course book the students had already studied. One afternoon, when I was conducting the lesson, one student asked me for my permission to leave the class early because he wanted to get to his house before the rain started. He told me if the rain started, the road in which he had to drive would be flooded and driving would be impossible. Given his request, I asked him to write a letter stating the reason why he wanted to leave the class early and to submit it to me. After a few minutes, he came to me with the excuse letter and left the class. Since I was busy with a classroom activity, I kept the letter in my file and continued my work until the class time was over. After I went home, I found the note which the student had given to me in the classroom. It seemed like a Japanese Haiku poem.
In the student’s excuse letter, the message what he really wanted to communicate to me was;
Dear Sir/teacher,
It may rain this afternoon. If it rains, the road will be flooded and travelling will be difficult, so please permit me to go home early today and don’t mark me absent in the attendance register.
Thank you.
(Student’s name or signature)
 
It should undoubtedly be accepted that lack of writing proficiency in the target language constantly poses problems for students studying in higher educational institutions both in academic and social contexts. After completing their studies at a higher educational institution, most students, who study different majors, aspire to find jobs while a few chooses to pursue their higher degree studies. My personal view that good proficiency in English is important for the youth in Arab countries is confirmed by Al-Badwawi (2001, p. 9) who states that possessing good English language abilities is considered important in increasing the future employability of young Omanis (He refers to Omanis but his claim is true for the whole Arab world) and improving their competitiveness in the regional and international labor markets. For both these situations stated above, they need to achieve writing proficiency in the target language. The note written by a student in the pre-elementary level student indicates that writing needs to be taught. This phenomenon has been documented by Lenneberg (1967) as follows:
Human beings universally learn to walk and talk, but that swimming and writing are culturally specific, learned behaviors. We learn to swim if there is a body of water available and usually only if someone teaches us. We can write if we are members of a literate society and usually only if someone teaches us. Just as there are non-swimmers, poor swimmers, and excellent swimmers, so it is for writers
 
It can be assumed that if writing instructors do not address the type of issue as described above, what students write does not conform to the discourse and genre requirements that are demanded in academic writing.
Furthermore, it needs to be stressed that if the problem of writing proficiency of my learners who study English in EFL contexts is not properly addressed at the Pre-elementary stage, it will continue to pose serious communication problems. Therefore, given the problem described above, EFL teachers should pay attention to ways and means through which they can help their students achieve academic writing proficiency in the target language.
However, as is often the case in Arab countries, the medium of instruction in schools in most Arab countries is Arabic. English is taught as a foreign language mostly by Non-native bilingual and hired mono-lingual teachers. Stressing on the status of those teachers and their teaching methodologies, Al-Jadid (2009, p. 37) states,
I know from my own experience that many teachers (both ‘bilinguals’ and imported ‘monolinguals’) are still not well trained in current methods and pedagogies of ELT. Teaching directly from text-books and learning by rote is the norm, especially in schools. Students are often bored and as a result lack enthusiasm for and commitment to learning and acquiring English, despite the fact that English is the key to future career advancement and security.
Fareh (2010) also reports that inadequate preparation of EFL teachers, lack of motivation on the part of learners, teacher-centered teaching methods and inadequate assessment techniques are some of the major factors that render EFL programs unable to deliver as expected.
In conclusion, as Al-Jadid and Fareh observe, it can be assumed the status quo of ELT practice in Arab countries’ state schools. Based on their observations and my experience with the current students I teach, I assume that students do not receive adequate exposure to English while they are at schools. Therefore, once they enter a college where the medium of instruction in their chosen major is English, they fail to perform well in listening, speaking and reading in general and writing in particular. Writing is a cognitive activity and it involves a process that learners need to be taught and guided through a carefully designed study program which is relevant to their knowledge, level, age and interests in order for the learners to achieve their personal, vocational and academic goals.  
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Al-Badri, S. B. M. (2013). “Planting the seeds”: Creativity in the AFTC Classroom. AL Kulial,
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       Academic Writing at the Colleges of Applied Sciences in Oman. (Doctoral dissertation,
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Al-Jadid, H. S. (2009). Teaching English as a foreign language in Oman: An Exploration of 
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